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Round 4 Entry for #HyperionConference.
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HC12-013 Storm - Liebel [Swoobat] and Raizel [Yamask]
HC12-028 Miyung Park
HC12-033 Sookie Carlisle

FOE Naomi Pleasants

JUDGE Celeste Mason
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Shinkoryu14 Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice story flow and artwork, as always~ Poor kid, you really need to teach that Amoongus some legit attacks.

Got a tiny bit confused in places though because it wasn't always consistent as to if the "out loud" stuff was meant to be read first or the "Miyung thoughts" and in places where you were supposed to read the out loud first having Miyung's perspective at the top was hella confusing because most people will instinctively read from top to bottom.
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TwelvePM Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? I was so peeved at myself because I had to remove a lot of frames to save time. OTL Thanks Shink! xD
That Amoongus works best as a meatshield.

SOB. I was afraid of that. xDD;; I was thinking of making the thought bubble appear much later, but got scared that people will skip over it by flicking through too quickly. Something that hopefully I'll fix in future.
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:iconjing-royale:
Poppin is awesome. Love the humor! Great job!
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TwelvePM Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Explosive preseeeents~ Thank you! 8D
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:icon4pikachu4:
I really love this entry. Of the ones I've read so far, yours is one of the few that has a nice lil story to go along with the task given to you by the judges. And there were lots of funny little parts in there that made it entertaining throughout. Also, I gotta thank you for including Mason in there, haha! You pretty much pegged her.

Great job! Good luck to you!
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TwelvePM Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaah thank you so much! xDD
I wish I could have put more content in, but school had to do things. I'm happy you like what I could manage. xD;;
Thank you! I'll try my best. 8D
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Stormful Aug 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ohhhh myyyyyy gooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd
this is so cute holy poop I'm going to faint
you drew Raz and Liebe so well ahhhhh *__* they're so cute ahhh sdkfhsdf
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TwelvePM Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a tendency to draw everything cute for some reason I'm sorry. xDD;;
NOW TO WAIT FOR ROUND 5.
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Dragonguardian253 Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay,I actually LOL on two of Miyung's comments!This was a funny comic!
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TwelvePM Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaah I'm so happy to hear that. xDD Thank you!
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