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Round 4 Entry for #HyperionConference.
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HC12-013 Storm - Liebel [Swoobat] and Raizel [Yamask]
HC12-028 Miyung Park
HC12-033 Sookie Carlisle

FOE Naomi Pleasants

JUDGE Celeste Mason
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice story flow and artwork, as always~ Poor kid, you really need to teach that Amoongus some legit attacks.

Got a tiny bit confused in places though because it wasn't always consistent as to if the "out loud" stuff was meant to be read first or the "Miyung thoughts" and in places where you were supposed to read the out loud first having Miyung's perspective at the top was hella confusing because most people will instinctively read from top to bottom.
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
Really? I was so peeved at myself because I had to remove a lot of frames to save time. OTL Thanks Shink! xD
That Amoongus works best as a meatshield.

SOB. I was afraid of that. xDD;; I was thinking of making the thought bubble appear much later, but got scared that people will skip over it by flicking through too quickly. Something that hopefully I'll fix in future.
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Jing-Royale Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Poppin is awesome. Love the humor! Great job!
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Explosive preseeeents~ Thank you! 8D
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4pikachu4 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
I really love this entry. Of the ones I've read so far, yours is one of the few that has a nice lil story to go along with the task given to you by the judges. And there were lots of funny little parts in there that made it entertaining throughout. Also, I gotta thank you for including Mason in there, haha! You pretty much pegged her.

Great job! Good luck to you!
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Aaaah thank you so much! xDD
I wish I could have put more content in, but school had to do things. I'm happy you like what I could manage. xD;;
Thank you! I'll try my best. 8D
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Stormful Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
ohhhh myyyyyy gooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd
this is so cute holy poop I'm going to faint
you drew Raz and Liebe so well ahhhhh *__* they're so cute ahhh sdkfhsdf
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
I have a tendency to draw everything cute for some reason I'm sorry. xDD;;
NOW TO WAIT FOR ROUND 5.
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Dragonguardian253 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay,I actually LOL on two of Miyung's comments!This was a funny comic!
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Aaaah I'm so happy to hear that. xDD Thank you!
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Dragonguardian253 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
My pleasure.I really like the comic and everything!
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nekobus246 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
I think I just found a new reason to like Poppen XD
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
The fact that he can be a bomb terrorist? 8D /shot
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nekobus246 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
:iconhmplz::iconsaysplz: ...............maybe............. XD
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Porcubird Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh gooosh this entry <3
Aaaah your style is just adorable and I just adore your entries, the story was funny and a joy to read and I just love how you draw pokemon, Poppen especially. I don't think I've ever seen a cuter Delibird >v<
Best of luck passing!
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Fweeee! Thank you! 8D
Oh God, after struggling to draw people, Pokemon are soooo fun to draw. xDD
Yaay! My portrayal of the Santa bird is a success! 8D
Thank you so much! Best of luck to you too. 8D
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rockingyourstar Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Ohmygawd, that was one of the funniest rounds EVER. Miyung's commentary was hilarious, and Poppen is just so cute! This was such a cool style to do the round in. Thanks a bunch for the cameo!
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Teehee thank you! 8D
Sookie was fun to draw. I love her hat. x3
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Eledora Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Just how many panels did I read through @v@; This is amazing! I really like how you make use of the glowy and blurry effects from flash for all the effects, they all look so professional!
I like the idea of putting a separate panel for Melon's thoughts too, it reminds me of DS games xDD
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Hundreds. I don't even know why.
xD Thank you! I had to restrain myself though. The effects made Flash really laggy and annoying. |D
I love them DS games. I need to dig mine of the dust. OTL
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rtres Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh god, I love Poppen! xDDD
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
PRESENTS FOR EVERYONE.
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MillaJV Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this so much XD
Why does all your stuff have to be so amazing? D:<
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
LOL WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?
If only I didn't have exams this entire round. ;A;
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:iconmillajv:
MillaJV Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Could've been worse. You could have been a horrible procrastinator.
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Kl0ckW0Rk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
that was awesome! :D very fun read ^__^
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
8D I'm so glad. Thank you!
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Kl0ckW0Rk Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
ahh it's always a pleasure ^__^
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Engravement Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
This Entry has substantial flow and humor, emphasis on humor.
You did a heap of hard work, Twelve and it really shows.
I be the prouds of you. Now get some rest.
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Daaw thanks Grave! 8D
And many sleep had been had. I think I hibernated.
THERE WAS SO MUCH MORE I WANTED TO PUT IN. BAAAAW WHY SCHOOL. WHYYY.
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:iconwavily:
wavily Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hilarious and nicely animated. I love your entries!
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
8DD Fwee! Thank you! The flash comic form seems to get more and more popular these days. xD
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Kimchiitazztic Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol that's cuute! Like how you added korean:P
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
If only I knew more Korean to put in full sentences that actually make sense without having someone check over it. xD;;
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Kimchiitazztic Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol that's fun the little korean that you put in is cuute and it goes well with the timing!
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deedledove Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012   Digital Artist
Poppen is so adorable >w< You did an amazing job!
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Daaw thank you! 8D
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fluffyz Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
I like when you use this flash format. It just works very well for you! I guess because you know how to do it.
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TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Haha Thanks! 8D I wish I had more time to do this. OTL There was so much stuff I wanted to put in.
How's your progress with using flash? 8D
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fluffyz Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Well it always seems nobody can get everything in that they want. :C

Ummmm I've totally been doing flash stuff, yeah. Totally.
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Hardcore360 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome! :D
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:icontwelvepm:
TwelvePM Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Thanks! 8D
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Hardcore360 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student General Artist
you're welcome! :meow:
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